Let's start from the bottom up, I had Alan and Rashmina from EMC look at my project and also Taylor Thompson as my outside person to look at it. I turned it in on time so I think that fits for timeliness. My story is authentic as it is about true events between me and my brother. I think there is a hook and I think the way it is displayed means something to me, but is also valuable to any onlooker. For storytelling I think I might be lacking a more complex beginning, middle and end and I think that if I hadn't mentioned at the end what each PPoT was then it might have gotten lost. I think that meets the parameters in a succinct way so, yea.